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1. e Access Code This will be provided to you by your Instructor Administrator e Title This is optional e Last Name First Name Middle Initial e Email Address e User Name This is the name by which you will be known in the Criterion system for example astudent e Password All users MUST follow the complexity requirements for creating a password These requirements are listed on the Create User Account screen e Security Question and Answer You can use the drop down menu to select from a set of security questions OR you can create your own custom question answer 3 Click lt Submit gt The following message will be displayed on the screen User Account Created Successfully 4 Click lt OK gt You will return to the Criterion Log in page to sign in with your new user information Copyright 2013 by Educational Testing Service ETS All rights reserved April 2013 ETS the ETS logo E RATER and CRITERION are registered trademarks of Educational Testing Service ETS 4 Criterion User Manual 2 2 Sign In 1 In the Criterion Log in page go to the Returning User section shown below ETS HOME CRITERION HOME s Criterion SExy Sign In to Your Criterion amp Account HELF CLIEMT SERVICE 5 The Criterion Online Writing Evaluation service from ETS a web based instructional writing tool that helps students plan write and Quick Links revisa their essays guided by ins
2. Bur np req marg BR b vhe b di At DR Tim l di amare el rar diaplay dA es DE eget elis vid deed plan Start OF vibes e weisud y PEL Vau fiy iia Mry GAS EEE Ve avillakla akauka For deb RI EE Print Saletl dere Dire parre Da fees amd deerant des es u berr ilk aflame 2 08 2011 Cem 31 2018 Saved Draft Jan 29 2014 00 28 52 AM EST a Start a L N 14 2013 QM uns Tot Ahem Saved Revise Jan 24 2044 40 54 39 EST E E EST EDT Artermpt 2 Jan 29 2604 10002 59 AM EST Afempt 1 Jan 29 10002515 EST Hew 14 2013 56 24 12 EST dapa Fassy il Hazar Erin Ann Cay E A gets reed 5 ETA PT ya Li TERSKE I ami DGUTENGOA ar regener beet of Dirree beroer VER F SE BIET I IP aid TA penu immu i narman 2 Select a word in your peer s essay that you would like to comment on and click the Add Comment button Copyright 2013 by Educational Testing Service ETS All rights reserved April 2013 ETS the ETS logo E RATER and CRITERION are registered trademarks of Educational Testing Service ETS 23 Criterion User Manual Criterion MEER d Anns Brown Student ian Out AP English 2013 14 South School District South High School AP Engish 2017 Welcome te
3. Criterion Anna Grown w Sign Out AP English 2013 14 Class South School District South High School AP English 201 fo AP English 2013 14 Pleace enam rre your password and security queste and arrer ance pou have sel regetercd text Timed assignments will mot displa y assmjnment bext Start a plan or view a caved pla n Start a response or wiew a previous submitted Te amp pontke attempt You may Print reve any exmhng attempt View available results for attempts Select a peer rewew name to reveiw and comment on Wer submitted attempt Student Start Plan Dect oe 2073 OCT 3T 20175 10 of 10 02 52 55 PM Dn Do O0 AM Aliempis R EST EDT Advice t Freshman Start Plan 14 2013 C124 2015 B or T tre Eni et Attempt 7 20 2014 10 02 59 AM EST 8 8 10 24 32 AM 65 0006 Available Attempt 1 Jan 9 2014 10 02 16 EST Start Response l Choose the type of plan you would like to use Copyright 2013 by Educational Testing Service ETS All rights reserved ETS the ETS logo E RATER and CRITERION are registered trademarks of Educational Testing Service ETS ES How 14 2013 10 24 12 AM EST 2015 UB OO DO EDT 10 1 Atiempis Availabe April 2013 14 Criterion User Manual HOMME CLIENT SERVICE 5 HE SOURCES HELP Cr
4. id ure pou fro Bel eT ACTIVITY ASSIGHMEHNT 5 ian Ravie dined liad adit es iive a im plan Puck onde Aerien rail i te vien Writer s iuggtiti nd Fareisi asd edit Wii il mora MILETIN LE ait aval able i drah ar ul T il si Bauen Review available reruba far rara sad deers analyzi Sar rka wahreirnes arampr Fwpars thie auzigaraar arrampr arrears haiara caus awiran Advice to Freshman Attempt 2 mm cos SE Score Analysig Feedback Analysis Trait ii priwidad in ivi kiry amp Davelapeent Gbami Mechasica arsi Styla The feedback id udis b guide Ek proces The of arot ibori the number ef emari fer each hpa The rallies radii age biel dascnppon of the arit and geidaace for irs carnmscrizn Tha cenrax sanaiiva pecan of the Wrirar kansbock par sina the amer and provides a more complara larron ca rha error ard correction LI Nl Writer amp Handbook Usage Section Usage Purpose of this section This section provides information oa the faliewing vage errant Determner aus Agnieemarnt s Are Eroii Wards VWrnng Form ad Word 5 fiuty Comparnasns Honatandand Word Form Error Part of Soeech can provide feedback pa n variety eT errans bul nal
5. know Eme She Ead already hun herself on the fuas vau and A woedkd mot be wise pO vani again but ahe had worked all her LE M PUOI ven birev e TOUDO TP 00 0 RUNS life to get where she was Tt was her dream co win the gold she wanted The pressure was ad on her Tt was eher go for what she he ture Sh i herself on the Est vast and 1 wauki not be wise do vault agam but abe had arated amd win the poked or d what she should and forget about it 5a she veoulde t inpare herself farther As we all know she went for Saved Jan 9 20684 10 50 31 EST Em 4 2 2 4 Peer Review When Peer Review is available on an assignment your peer group member s names will be visible in the Peer Review Column on your Class Assignments tab Students names are in bold once they have submitted an essay on that particular assignment l To begin Peer Review click on the name of the student whose essay you would like to view see below Names of students that are not in blue have not yet submitted their essays and therefore are not yet for Peer Review d wax mriMfif amp Criterion green eket AP English 2013 14 Cue Goto High Scheel AP 207 AF Fap gh 202 14 RAKE aem ma pacer pee ang ey quesriat ang angue BILD
6. AP English 2013 14 Class South School District South High School AP English 201 2013 14 Pleace ema m your password and security question and amewer once pou have self regetered ACTWITY ASSIGNMENTS pment actmity 15 listed below Select an achwity item to sw YUT Select reviewer name to view the comments or diaiogue m ade on your at tempte d responsa View Comments View Dialsgue Student Leader Saved Draft Jan 29 2014 10 01 38 AM EST ln Freshman Attempt 2 Jan 29 2014 10 02 59 AM EST Copyright 2013 by Educational Testing Service ETS All rights reserved ETS the ETS logo E RATER and CRITERION are registered trademarks of Educational Testing Service ETS Print April 2013 13 Criterion User Manual 4 2 2 Assignments The Assignment tab opens a screen that shows a list of the assignments the Instructor has given to the class along with their start and end dates and the number of attempts the student is permitted to use when responding to the assignment Click on the name of the assignment to see Assignment details The essay topic and any supporting materials will become visible Timed assignments will not display assignment text HORAE CUEMT SERVES FEE SOURCES HELP L s Criterion Anna Brown Student w Sign Gut AP English 2013 14 Class South School District South High School AP English 201 5 Velcorne fo AP Engle 2013 14 Pease gonad me your passwor
7. 2023 14 Meese emad me your a d security Questor and ence you Arre istered ACTIVITY ASSIGNMENTS Make Comments Highlight a set of text withie the ettemet below Add Comment and eater the comment text Select comment to edit or remove amp Save all comments Peer Review Brian Harper Student Leader Attempt 9 4 Response Student Leader Given me many different personalities at Migh schoo and varying interests of the many students what kind of a student makes a good leader What are qualities tha help someone earn t e respect of his her peers Wile an essay i which you describe the Qualipes of student det c Everybody at some point in their Efe has been torn between what they want to do and what they feel they should do because of what others think or say The question is can we ever just do what we want to do regardless of what others around us say It s human nature that NERE KA guide ia Nea i5 the best Problems such as money proximity to home and the educational programs of the colleges arise For instance I have a friend who fered ber a full ride to their school and it 15 also close to home but she d rather not go there UC Berkley and Cornell are what she wants to choose between reme ee pee Berkley on the other hand is not as expensive but it is second on her l st The problem all comes down to money She wants to go to Cornel but that means her parents would
8. Trait ii proweded in five key catiszorimi rda amp Development ga Marhasici acd Styla The feedback ji udi b guide Ek proceda of isidin guldanca for ira conection Tha conraxr sangiriya pacrian of rha Handbock parzaias che amor and provides a mara complara asson ca the arror amd ira correctiar The graghic gusmary of kawa the of amara for each The Greed brie dascnpton of the arces and Hi Wibe Writers Handbook Usage Section Usage Purpose of this section section provides information po the follewing gsape ETHE Gennes au Aq g Arie Conte Words Wirning Form ad Wand Nongtandand Word Form Error Wrong Part of Zoeech Crirerian can prowehe feedback p g Yareb sd geese errors Bul nol all al mam min gectea Ip help yog ecerect emg Crack WEN your imgiruetor if you do net understand heva by neve Tras mers ihat ate Sam Wage enone are caused by m sed ln er natales n typing Whee Crirenon identifhes an ern ma feedback meggece wil miann yog ima error haa been caused by a maspeling er a type 6 The horizontal menu contains the major trait feedback categories including Organization amp Development Grammar Usage Mechanics and Style The number in parentheses indic
9. Save button was not selected before clicking Start Response Criterion will notify you that you have unsaved work that will not be transferred to the Response tab 4 2 2 2 Start Response Essays are completed and submitted on the response page The essay may be typed or copied and pasted into the text box at the bottom of the page Copyright 2013 by Educational Testing Service ETS All rights reserved April 2013 ETS the ETS logo E RATER and CRITERION are registered trademarks of Educational Testing Service ETS 15 Criterion User Manual HOME CLIENT BOL IRCEF HELF Criterion Aena Brown Student Sige Out AP English 2013 14 Clas South School Distrid South High School AP English 207 Visine pa AP 1 14 Pisas ar m pee and uy queen gud JE TENA ann pe avs ell reer ACTIVITY ASSIGHMENTS ales plac typa t g t tacta Ravossw as hada taut and imstrurtoxng Review ariditiacal material d available DHalngus for each avzignemanst inzludeas ingtrumnrs and paart aczigmad inr racism rarpnnza taw in the adibsr helna fave n draft kn wire om acd view plempt Student Leader Attempt 1 E Sereni L eadar Given ihe many different personaliies al a high schoo and me varying inieresis of the many Students what kind of a student makes a good leader What are the q
10. rove e omens 8 The Dialogue window updates to display your comments All Dialogue becomes part of the history of the essay NOTE To view all Dialogue and Comments from your peers amp or instructor on your own essays refer to section 4 2 1 Copyright 2013 by Educational Testing Service ETS All rights reserved April 2013 ETS the ETS logo E RATER and CRITERION are registered trademarks of Educational Testing Service ETS 25
11. 2013 by ETS All rights reserved ETS the ETS logo LISTENING LEARNING LEADING and CRITERION are registered trademarks of Educational Testing Service ETS in the United States of America and other countries throughout the world Listening Learning Leading 3 Click lt Submit gt Your user name will be sent to you If you have not provided an email address please contact your Criterion administrator for assistance Copyright 2013 by Educational Testing Service ETS All rights reserved April 2013 ETS the ETS logo E RATER and CRITERION are registered trademarks of Educational Testing Service ETS 6 Criterion User Manual 2 2 2 Forgot Password 1 In the Criterion Log in page go to the Returning User section and click on the Forgot Password link 2 In the Forgot Password screen that appears enter your user name and click Submit s Criterion Forgot Password Enter your aecour t uger name quastien Your pxggward will ba aant te your ar 1 I 1 I ul a It 1 babra Terry Raw isyan ET dj Laren Lee mang pagg 3 In the following screen enter the answer to your security question If you do not remember the answer to your security question contact Criterion Support If have not set up a security question and answer yet contact your Criterion dministrator for assistance 4 Click Submit You will be assigned a temporary password that will be sent to your email address CL
12. Coma are what she wants choose between Iris obvious that she wants go to Cornel but the problem is it i a very expensive school Berkley on the cher Band i not expensive but i is second on ber ist The problem all comes down to money She wants to po to Cornell bat that means ber parents would have to spend thousands more dollars than if she went to Her told ber that ix fine with them but ber guilty conscious is telling her that amp l too mach money since ber pareeitx wil now have to pay for three kids in college T told ber ance her parents ar f n wath st then ah should go t Comel where wil make her the happsest Ti kimi ber for free Wears now amd even we are good friends it 15 very clear to me that ihe not happy here in Cakfarnia She nady a change and chocamg What she wants wall bung Ger the happiness she needs In thes case she not kelen to me and wall attend UC Berkley faz kley i shil a very good college many people would die to go thers bol she doesa i seem io be all that happy about her decrson Another examples Ken Sinan at the Summer Campes Even though we found out she have po do che vauir she d n knew n ac te tme She had herself en vaai and it would mot be wise to van r agn but she had worked ali her to pet where Ehe waa was ber dream io win the poid she wanted The poesgare was all om her It wa
13. ETS Criterion STUDENT USER MANUAL HELP SECTION ADMIN Criterion NG Criterion Online Writing Evaluation June 2013 Chrystal Anderson REVISED JANUARY 2014 ANNA LITZ Criterion User Manual TABLE OF CONTENTS LO 3 2 0 GET TUNG STARTED ornnes endete kez d n 3 Z I CREATE A USER ACCOUNT aie ui ashen A ee WA LIE EI a al 3 OO ade E E DD 5 2 2 1 Forgot ser 2 2 2 TFODLgGOUPHSSWOLG tese r r OU UP M EE 7 2 9 POME PACE 7 2 3 BN lt HN MD n uL MM E M RR e 8 PAG nz Name ONC Kik a e hehe 8 2 3 2 1 Update Use JAGCOUPE nt teinte resi cn enka A A DA a tasted Lol d 9 2 34 Enter ACCESS xt dI tc dide IM LC Dr UI IL MU an 9 4 0 STUDENT ACTIVLETLIES kiii iiy vn e bue r veo ee 11 4 1 UNDERSTANDING THE CLASSES SECTION OF YOUR HOME 12 4 2 ACTION CONS 000 0 H HHR nRHHRHRHRBHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH MM HMI 13 13 2 ES 14 3 2 2 1 UM LC URN MED ERE M UEM PI UID 14 Copyright 2013 by Educational Testing Servi
14. High School has conneched you to dass AP Englksh 2013 14 an 28 2014 04 55 28 PM EST You are disconnected from dass AP English 2013 14 29 2014 04 51 49 PM EST Anna rown is new disconnected Pedone Tisha fram AP English 2013 14 an 22 2014 11 09 15 EST Anna Brown of South High School has connected you to class Test for active students va submissions Classes AP English 2013 14 Grade Mrs Brown Oct 31 2015 South School District j 12 English Mrs Eran Auger 2074 South School Distinct 12 Copyright 2013 by Educational Testing Service ETS All rights reserved April 2013 ETS the ETS logo E RATER and CRITERION are registered trademarks of Educational Testing Service ETS 12 4 2 Action Icons Criterion User Manual The class page of the Criterion system provides two tabs that let Students perform different tasks associated with their assigned classes 4 2 1 Activity The Activity tab provides the Student with a view of the work he she has completed on class assignments l The View Comments link will allow the student to view peer comments if permitted and Instructor comments 2 The View Dialogue link allows the student to see the most recent message in the discussion between the Student and Instructor for each specific assignment 3 The drop down menu on the right of the screen allow students to toggle between classes as applicable s Criterion RE SULIRCE 5
15. User Manual This verb may be i ceerect Proofread the sentence cto make sere ve weed the correct form of the verb we ever just do what we want to do regardless of what others around us sav It s human nature that makes us Ill formed Verbs 3 Everybody at some m ther Efe has been torn between what they want to do and what they feel they should do because of what others thnk or sav The question s want things and it is cur conscious that tel us At this time of the year every senior who has been accepted to more than one college is racking their brains and deciding which college is the best Problems such as money proximity to home and the educational programs of the colleges arise For instance I have a friend who is deciding whether to go to Cornell University UC Berk ev or UCLA which in my opinion are all extremely good schools UCLA offered her a full ride to their school and it is also close to home but she d rather not go there UC Berkley and Cornell are what she wants to choose between is obvious that she wants to go to Cornell but the problem is t i a very expensive school Berkley om the other hand is not as expensive but it 15 second on her list The problem all comes down to money She wants to go to Cornel but that means ber parents would have to spend thousands more dollars than she went to Berkley Her parents told ber that s fine with them but her guilty conscoous s tell ng
16. all ed then Lage this pecten in help yp ceerect Check wil your imgiructar if you do nal understand how b reves Ba erent hat ate Some usage emos are cages by maseeling or marais in typing Whee Cnfenon iHestifes an error Pu feedback messege wil inienn you if he error has been soused by a maspeling ar a typo p P j T A 2 4 n d sr 5 Click on the Response tab to view specific trait feedback Copyright 2013 by Educational Testing Service ETS All rights reserved April 2013 ETS the ETS logo E RATER and CRITERION are registered trademarks of Educational Testing Service ETS 19 Criterion User Manual amp Criterion rr Anas rovi Shadia dunt AP English 2013 14 Chii Bout ehaol Goeth High School AP Engish 2017 Wicie b 200 J r2 Pade ee m poor ad Sure Qun Ek bd bude S 58 pou Fro ele ACTIVITY ASSIGHMEHT ian Favors dined plii adit cf iive i bim plan Peed Pande Aerien trait hired back highlights te view Hassdbask itd adit Wii ate i ere alerts anre v bl as a draf ar suleril ad acie Bauen view awa reruba for erare lar rka pobre Fvparz thie an ripsmanar Se IT mu Cee clogs agiran Advice to Freshman Attempt 2 Feedback Ji nahya in
17. avasable i drah ar ul T il civ dilbarga Ra ulu Peisa reruba far erara sad baz ar Far rka wihrirned amamp thie amam p sad in tareas halara expires Advice to Freshman Attempt 8 1 eo Ndvice bo Freshman As 8 Senor you will 2000 be gradaating from your hign schon Whar advice would you give a af eter AGN Sele Inem have hanay productive years im heh schon Winda am easy detailing Ine axperiances and advice yog fee Weld ba helel 30maone Beginning his er ner high Sfr Ill formed Verbs Everybody zi some posent im ther Efe has been tom between what they want io do and whai they feel they whould do because of what others thank or xay The question is ican we ever past do what we want to do regardless of what others around us sav Ia haman nature that makes us want tangs and d 15 oar conscius that ds At this tim of the year every senses who has been accepted t mare than one colege i rack ng thet brana and which college 15 best Problems such as money proxmsty io home and the educam mal programs af the colleges For eustance have a fend who deodmg whetha to go to Cornel University UC Berk ey oc UCLA winch m my opason arc ad good schools UCLA offered her a fud mde to ther schoo and di also close to home but she d rather mol zo there UC Barkley and
18. didn t have to do the vault she didn t know at the time Eko ind urondy kurt aes ew ke frt vult and t wd net bo wize to about it so she wouldn t injure herself further As we 20 know she went for what she wanted and got it Not only was she and her teammates happy but so was all of the people living States of America Everybody at some pomt m thew has been torn between what they want to do and what they feel they should do because of what others think or say The queston s can we ever do what we want to do regardless of what others around us say t s human nature that makes us want things and it is our conscious that tell us what we want isn t always the right thing or better for us and others around us 1n my opinion there are definitely circumstances which it is better to forget what we should do and go abead and do what we want to if we do not there would be little to no happiness in our lives 4 Click Save to keep the feedback Your fellow student will now see your comments when they roll their cursor over the highlighted text To delete a comment click on the highlighted text and click the Remove Comment button 6 To discuss a peer s assignment in a dialogue complete step 1 and then click the Dialogue button on the right side of your screen Copyright 2013 by Educational Testing Service ETS All rights reserved April 2013 ETS the ETS logo E RATER and CRITERION are registered trademarks
19. emu me poor Gawd ibd quete and bw veu bee dal rete Chas Scbol South High Scheol 201 ACTIVITY ASSIGNMENTS lan Ravers dived plani edt c iive e Fad bande Aerien rail te vires Writer s Airisa acd diL Aii attempt il evene fw avaiable Bara k drah of zl m l k ndr DEL Ri aa ulan reruba fer erara sad baz ar far rba subhmimed yrramps Fugar thee aa niga rmanr xrramps sad ina cosraars before lanu awiran Advice to Freshman Attempt 7 mu TERESAN XE vi Firmen senior pou will soon be graduating fom your high schon What advice would veu give a Meanman at your fo hap inem have happy productiva years in high sehen Witte an essay datalling ihe axparianced and advice you fea would be baleful someone beginning hir ar har high Tll formed Verbs 3 Everybody at some point in tht garbied Sentences what they want to do and what they feel they should do because of what others think or say The question is can we ever just do what we want to do regardless of what others around us say It s human mature that makes us want things and i15 or const At dus Eme of tho subject Verb Agreement d to more than one college s racking ther brams and deciding whoch college the best Problems such as m
20. from AP English 2013 14 Jan 32 2014 11 00 15 AM EST Anna Brown of South High School has connected you to class Test for active students ws submissions notices Classes Print AP English 2013 14 Grade Mrs Brown Oct31 2015 South School District 12 English Grade Mrs Broan Auger 2014 South School District 12 2 In the Connect screen that appears enter the access code in the appropriate fields The access code will be given to you by an Instructor or Administrator s Criterion Connect Enter the access code provided to you Confirm you are connecting to the correct institution and role Access Code Connect 3 Click on the Connect icon in the screen The next screen will display the institution to which you are connecting Please check to make sure you are connecting to the proper class or institution before proceeding Copyright 2013 by Educational Testing Service ETS All rights reserved April 2013 ETS the ETS logo E RATER and CRITERION are registered trademarks of Educational Testing Service ETS 10 Criterion User Manual Connect Cancel You connecting as Student to UT English Literature 101 DFriedman School A Demo Client gal P amp y About Criterion re 2013 FTS LE ETS ETS the ETS logo LISTENING R F FRK registered trademars F an 1 fre United States Amer Pe Laferenp eve ven Lev n 4 Once you are sure you are accessi
21. institution or a new class as an instructor or student Enter Access Code Notices Jan 29 2014 09 38 00 AM EST Jan 28 2014 04 56 51 PM EST Jan 2 2034 04 55 48 PM EST lan 28 2014 04 51 49 PM EST lan 22 2014 12 09 15 AM EST Anna Brown of South High School has connected you to dass AP 2013 14 Anna Brown of South Hegh School has corned ed you to class AP Engksh 2013 14 You are disconnected fram dass AP English 2013 14 Anna rown is new disconnected Pedane Tisha fram AP English 2013 14 Anna Brown of South High School has connected you to class Test for active students ws eubmissions Classes Grade Mrs Oct 31 2015 South School District 12 AP English 2013 14 Grade Mrs Bream Auger 2014 South School District English 12 2 3 1 Links The links at the very top right of the page see below are always available to the user By clicking on these links you have easy access to your Home page Client Services Resources and online Help 2 3 2 Name and Role Your Name and Role always appear at the top of your Home page CLIENT SERVICES RE SCHRHCE S HELE s Criterion Anna Brown Student Got a new Access Code Connect to an additional institution a higher role in your institution or a new class as an instructor or student Enter Access Code Student Guide for Beginners Notices Jan 29 2014 09 38 00 AM EST Jan 28 2014 04 56 51 PM EST Jan 8 2014 D4 55
22. password please enter passend in b kew bomen Confirm Password New Password Security Question E d Create Custom Cuastion Make selection lt Whal a your mothers miden nat Security Question Answer 4 Click lt Submit gt A message should appear saying that your update was successful 5 Clicking lt Cancel gt will return you to your Criterion Home page 2 3 4 Enter Access Code l To add yourself to another class another institution or another role in your institution click on the Enter Access Code link shown below on your Home page Copyright 2013 by Educational Testing Service ETS All rights reserved April 2013 ETS the ETS logo E RATER and CRITERION are registered trademarks of Educational Testing Service ETS 9 Criterion User Manual s Criterion SERVICES 1 RESOURCE Anna Brown Studerd Sign Out Student Quick Access Guide Student Guide for Beginners Got a new Access Code Connect to an additional institution a higher role in your institution or a new class as an instructor or student Notices Jan 29 2014 09 28 00 AM EST Anna Brown of South High School has connected vou to dass AP 20132 14 Jan 28 2014 04 56 51 PM EST Anna Brown of South School has connected you to dass AP 2013 14 Jan 28 2014 04 55 78 PM EST You are disconnected From dass AP English 2013 14 Jan 23 2014 04 51 49 PM EST Anna Drown is new disconnected Pedone Tiaha
23. system The links at the very top right of the page see below are always available to the user By clicking on these links you have easy access to your Home page Client Services Resources and online Help Copyright 2013 by Educational Testing Service ETS All rights reserved April 2013 ETS the ETS logo E RATER and CRITERION are registered trademarks of Educational Testing Service ETS 1 Criterion User Manual 4 1 Understanding the Classes Section of your Home Page The Classes section of the Student s Home page see below provides the Student with the following information about each class in which he she is enrolled e list of the classes in which the Student is enrolled e The grade level for each class e The names of all the instructors assigned to the class e The scheduled end date for the class e The status of the class To begin working within a class click on the name of the class HILME CLIENT SERVICES RE SCHEHX E 5 HELE Criterion Anna Grown Studernl Sign Qut Registration Instructions for Bookstore Students a Li 1 Got a new Access Code Connect to an additional institution a higher rale in your institution or a new class as an instructor or student Student uuick Accasa Guide Enter Access Code Student Guide for Beginners Notices 29 2014 00 38 00 AM EST Anna Brown of South High School has connected you to dass AP English 2013 14 28 2014 04 56 51 EST Jona Brown of South
24. to learn more about each type of error The context sensitive section of the Writer s Handbook pertains to the error and provides a more complete lesson on the error and its correction A Writer s Handbook link is available on the right side of the screen Copyright 2013 by Educational Testing Service ETS All rights reserved April 2013 ETS the ETS logo E RATER and CRITERION are registered trademarks of Educational Testing Service ETS 18 Criterion User Manual amp Criterion EE MN E se AP English 2013 14 Cma School Dura Seuth High Scheel AP Engkah 201 Ge Wace b AF Dale 20 J J43 Pape emi ma poor pideei and fiunt quite pube 0 38 veu ro pel o ated ACTIVITY ASSIGNMENTS Win Raves dined plaad adi davis a Sawm plan Puck binds Review irail highlights te vim Writer s ugej u U r Revise asd edit id aUbeespl il sore be Bora s a deal of ad d cine DDE Raum Review awa reruba fer erara sad bazik ar r na buin Far rba submimed armamps Pagar thie aucigarmanr xrramps sad ceosraars before awiran Advice to Freshman Attempt 7 mus onc Score Feedback Analysis Trait Feeback ii priwided in res kirg Orcarerabon amp Developer Qeaemmar Uitge pesi Styla The feedback id uiid quide Po procesi of The eraghic demreary of arcs
25. to more than ome college is racking their brams and deciding which college is the best Problems such as money proximity to home and the educational programs of the colleges arise For instance I have a friend who is decximg whether to go to Cornell Umversity UC Berk or UCLA winch my opinion are all extremely good schools UCLA offered her a full ride to their school and it is also close to home but she d rather not go there UC Berkley and Cornell are what she wants to choose between It ts obvious that she wants to go to Cornell but the problem is it is a very expensive school Berkley on the other hand is not as expensive but it is second on her Est The problem ail comes down to money She wants to go to Cornell but that means her parents would have to spend thousands more dollars than if she went to Berkley Her parents told her that is fine with them but ber guilty conscious is telling her that it is too much money since her parents wil now have to pay for three kids in college T told her since her parents are fine with it then she should go to Cornell where it will make o needs In this case she did not listen to me and wil attend UC Berkley next fall Berkley s stil a very good college would die to go there but she doesn t seem to be all that happy about her many people Another example is Strug at the Summer Olympics m Atlanta Even though ater we found out she
26. 78 IPM EST Jan 28 2014 04 51 49 PM EST lan 22 004 11 09 15 AM EST Classes AP English 2013 14 English Anna Brown of South High School has connected vou to dass AP 2012 14 Anna Brown of South Hsgh School has connected you to dass AP 2013 14 You are disconnected fram dass AP English 2013 14 Anna Drown is new disconnected Pedone Tisha fram AP English 2013 14 Anna Brown af South High School has connected you to class Test for active students ws submissions Grade Brown Oct 31 2015 12 Aug zr 2014 Grade Broan 12 Copyright 2013 by Educational Testing Service ETS All rights reserved ETS the ETS logo E RATER and CRITERION are registered trademarks of Educational Testing Service ETS g South School District South Schoo District April 2013 Criterion User Manual 2 3 2 1 Update User Account You can edit your User Account information from any screen l Atthe top of the screen roll over your name The edit account feature will appear as shown below 2 Click on Update User Account 3 In the Update User Account screen that appears make changes in the appropriate fields Update User Account Tithe First Middle initial Last Hama Anna Brown Email Address optional for students Confirm Email Address abrang sch arg abani Schaal arg User Nase arnbrnowr Current Passend You have to enter current password to edit your profilo to update
27. IENT SERVICES HELP r9 Criterion Forgot Password Enter your account user name and security question Your password will be reset and a new password will be sent to your email address If you do not have an email address a temporary password will display Attention Administrators Instructors and Students If you are prompted to answer the Security Question Favorite Job the Security Question Answer is Teaching User Name Security Question What is your mother s maiden name Security Question Answer Submit 2 3 Home Page Your Home page is the starting point for all your activities in the Criterion system The Home pages are different depending on your role From their Home page users can e Sign out from the Criterion system e Link to resource materials Copyright 2013 by Educational Testing Service ETS All rights reserved April 2013 ETS the ETS logo E RATER and CRITERION are registered trademarks of Educational Testing Service ETS 7 Criterion User Manual e Connect to a class e Read notices that provides information and updates e View information about classes for which they have signed Initiate various actions within the Criterion system by clicking on different icons CLIENT SERVICES RE SCHRHCE 5 Student Quick Access Guide Student Guide for Beginners r Criterion Got a new Access Code Connect to an additional institution a higher role in your
28. ake ber the happiest I ve know her for five years now and even though we are good friends it is very clear to me that she s not happy happiness she needs In this case she did not listen to me and wil attend UC Berkley next fall Berkley is stil a very good college many 9 Another example is Keri Strug at the Summer Olympics in Atlanta Even though later we found out she didn t have to do the vault she didn t know st at the time She had already hurt herself the first vault and it would mot be wise to vault get where she was It was her dream to win the gold she wanted it The pressure was all on her It was either go for what she wanted and win the gold or do what she should do and forget about it so she wouldn t injure herself further As wanted and got t Not only was she and her teammates happy but so was all of the people living Uzted States of America MR The question is can we ever past do what we want to do regardiess of what others 3700 Pasi gt Thanks for the commerce make te makes us want things and it is our conscious that tell us what we want isn t always the right thing or better for us and others around us In my opinion there are definitely circumstances in which it is better to forget what we should do and 9964 ts ary 50062 sa you not there would be little to no happiness m our lives Oram Pos Manse 5 onm mnr l give a des as 10 shai aes oe sehen
29. as made the Thesaurus available you may word in your essay TIMED Essays If your instruetor has chosen to have your essay timed a timer will appear You will have the time specified on the timer plan and complete your essay Be sure and leave sufficient time writing the essay ater do not akiw ror ier nevision Refresh send Frame Anza Bean Dh 2204 D L aet DAT n thin angagi desi Ee ee a Everybody at some point in their has been tem between what they want to do and what they feel they should do because of what others think or sav The question is can we ever just do what we want to do regardicss of that makes us want things and n our conscious that tell us Ar ths Gene of the year every sensor who has been accepted to more one college 15 racking them brams and deciding which college amp the best Problems such educational programs of the colleges arise For instance 1 have a friend who is deciding whether to go to Comel University UC Berk ev or UCLA which in my opinion are all extremely good schools UCLA offered her a f home but she d rather not go there UC Berkley and Comell are what she wants to choose between Its obvious that she wants bo go to Comel but the problem s 55 a very expensive school Berkley on the other hand n The problem all comes down to money She wants to go to Cornell but that means her parents would hav
30. ates the number of errors for each trait category Criterion at eem i wd ae B Anna Souder Bion Gut AP English 2013 14 Cuna Saath Senos Cait Sach igi School AP de Wess to AP nglab 202 J 14 Ha eee Se poor and escent An acura d piu K n eeu ACTIVITY 5 Fare saree plana adn ar gas a nas plan Rampornee Rawle rrair feedback highlights viam Wrirar a Hanchozk sugzanrizng Aawine and adir rbis arzwmpr if mora xrrargrs ore Sava op a drakt or nubmir am a rane stampt Ra dult Bate available adolta f r C r aed Recheck for tha iubitei pL Expait thii ped cabar before clas expired Advice t Freshman Anempr 2 vs BEN E Advice Ip Presi senior you mii soon be graduating from your high schoo What advice mould you give a frashman ar your schoo fo help tham have happy productive yews in high school Write an essay detailing fie and advice you fee wood be hella ro someone beginning his or her high 7 Select a Feedback Category to view list of possible errors In this example Grammar is selected The menu expands to display each feedback type The number of errors for each feedback type is indicated in parentheses Copyright 2013 by Educational Testing Service ETS All rights reserved April 2013 ETS the ETS logo E RATER an
31. ay The question 1s can rhat we want isn t always the right thing or better for us and others around us In my n there are definitely c Timestamps of the Last Auto save of a Response is Viewable to Students Saved Jan 29 2014 10 19 47 AM EST 6 Click Submit to complete the writing process and have Criterion evaluate the essay 7 Once the essay has been submitted the Results tab will display 4 2 2 3 Results amp Revise Criterion provides students with a Criterion Score Analysis and Feedback Analysis NOTE Results will only be Visible to you in enabled by your instructor Copyright 2013 by Educational Testing Service ETS All rights reserved April 2013 ETS the ETS logo E RATER and CRITERION are registered trademarks of Educational Testing Service ETS 17 Criterion User Manual Aree Saget AP English 2043 14 Chev School District Goeth High SchesL AP 201 Wapene ze AR Priel 2033 14i Paans el mae pacer pase anal ACTIVITY A S SHSHMEHT S Advice t Freshman Attempr 2 PLAN RESPON AE RESULTS ET Sone Anas k Criterion Score Score Guide Vow have sold wring skis and something ntecestng to say Y tur essay Rescon s more efectyvely 10 some parts of the topic or task than t9 oer parts Shoes some dept and complexity in your Aning Organizes ant your deas w n reasons and examples that are aepropewe Uses the ra
32. ce ETS All rights reserved April 2013 ETS the ETS logo E RATER and CRITERION are registered trademarks of Educational Testing Service ETS Criterion User Manual 1 0 INTRODUCTION Welcome to the Criterion Online Writing Evaluation Service This manual contains a step by step overview of all essential functions provided by Criterion The first time you use the Criterion service you will be required to register as a user To do this you will need the Access Code provided to you by your Administrator or Instructor You will have only a single User Name and Password even if you use Criterion in more than one role e g as an administrator an instructor and a student Links to your Home page Client Services Resources and online Help are available on every page after you sign in If you need assistance with the Criterion Online Writing Evaluation service please send an email to criterionsupport ets org or call 1 877 909 6442 2 0 GETTING STARTED 2 1 Create a User Account Use the following URL to access the Criterion Log in page http criterion ets org 1 In the New User field on the Criterion Log in page click on the Create Account link ETS HOME CRITERION HOME 5 Criterion EREZ A DN Sign In to Your Criterion Account HELP CLIEMT SERVICES The Criterion Online Writing Evaluation service from ETS is a web based instructional writing tool that helps students plan write and Quick Links re
33. d CRITERION are registered trademarks of Educational Testing Service ETS 20 Criterion User Manual amp Criterion i mem mmn i TR Binan Sarent Sion Gut AP English 2013 14 Wesce to Dagia 202 14 Pe cl S poor and pesc6ty QUM DAT A auge bode piu bv del n apnd Glew Suum Schosi Caine Goeth School TOIT ACTIVITY ASSHOMMENT 5 Plan Bavia plans ede gr Sacs a nes plan Raungornua Raia talr highlights viae wWrirar s Hancbozk awira ard adir hie amampe if mora xrrargrg sre Sawa a drakt ar nebmir am a rane xrramgr Ravite available C r l d fer the dubesittas EEL Expat this ki rin ma Dees pt ed bafera Cli expired Advice Freshman Attempt 2 a RE fo Fresia As senior you wil soon be graduating from pour high schoo What advice maid you give a fraghrman ar your schoo fo help them have happy productive years in high school Write an essay detailing the experiences and adice pou fee would be fo someone beginning his or her high 8 Select a Feedback Type to review the errors within your essay In this example 111 Verbs is selected amp Criterion m Anna rows Studer hano AP English 2043 14 b AF Dal 208 J p4 Plane
34. d and security questonm and amcwer eme pou have sel reseetered A tert Timed assignments will not y assmjnment baxt Start a plan or view caved pla n Start a response wiew a previous submitted attempt You may Print any exin abbempt View available results Tor attempts Select peer review name to amd Comment on heir attempt Student Laadar Start Plan Dect 06 2013 OCT 3T 2015 10 of 10 EL Ea Saved Draft Jan 29 2014 10 01 38 AM EST 03 52 50 PM DR DD DD AM Attempts 5 R EST EDT Availabe Advice to Freshman Start Plan 14 7013 C124 2015 Bi or 10 MM Attempt 2 Jan 29 2014 10 02 58 AM EST 578 10 24 55 AM 65 0096 Available EST EDT Attempt 1 Jan 29 2014 10 02 15 EST Advisory Start Response Special Place Start Plan Now 14 2013 00121 2015 1 of 1 Attempts y 10 21 12 AM DBSODOCDO EDT NOTE Criterion will give notification if you are starting a timed assignment The time limit applies to the entire planning writing and revision process 3 2 2 1 Start Plan Students have the opportunity to create a plan before writing their essay if the Instructor has made this an available feature To work with plans click Start Plan next to the assignment name The essay topic will remain visible at the top of the page HORDE SERHS HE SOURCE 5 HELP
35. dhori the nembar al arrori for hich Tha r l vie Gadd b l ped a bel diki Gri p l n of che error and qgeidaaca for Tha coors pacrian of the iritare Handbosk pansing cha emor and pravidas a more complerta larron on the amor sad ix correction MI Wl a l ae u Meee t Trait Feedback Analysis Section Grammar Purpose of this section This section provides information on the Tollcwing grammar emn fragmenta Sarfances Qarbied Sentences Subieci erb Agreement Errors Pronoun Errors Podbite Error Wrong of Mag Words Pepednead Thig Critanon c n Provide feeTback On many grammabical and sentence Mrvctur Aii But n l h m Uie Ia secmen l3 help veu connect emari Check wim your natructir you d nt undensitisd how 16 nevii B ene m t ane Some grammar errors ane caused by misapeling or in bypins When Criterion identities a hyping oc speling enor that might be causing grammar error the feedback message vill let yo know The feedback poria serons hal are dilficull to rama or Cen unos arora occur when a word meeting an xia word in added ar the wrong Tere ad the word i uted r amp Criterion mre AP English 2013 14 ikii South Sehsol South High School 2017 Wiima b AF Daal 200 J J45 F age eni m poor Baier ad Sore
36. dy hart herself on the first vault and it would not be wise t vault again but she had worked all her life t get where she was twas ber dre Wrong or Missing Weed 4 st The pressure was all on was ether go for what she wanted and win tbe gold or do what she should do and forget about it so she wouldn t eure herself further As we all know she went for what she wanted and got Not ony was she and fi vis all of the people living Urnied Sees of America Proofread Everybody at some point tht ae so cese cse cesses WAE they want t do and what they feel they should do because of what others think or say The question js lean we ever just do what we want to dor of what others around as say T s human nature that makes us want things and it is our conscious that tell us what we want isn t always the right thing or better for us and others around us In my there are definutely circumstances i which it is better to forget what we should do and go ahead and do what we want to if we do not there would be bile to no m our bwes 9 The Response tab updates to display all possible errors for the selected Feedback Type Errors are highlighted and roll over notes provide details on each error Copyright 2013 by Educational Testing Service ETS All rights reserved April 2013 ETS the ETS logo E RATER and CRITERION are registered trademarks of Educational Testing Service ETS 21 Criterion
37. e to spend thousands more dollars than if she went to Berkley Her parents told her that is fine with them but her guilt money since her parents will now have to pay fer three keds m college I told ber since her parents Enc with it then she should go to Comel where it will make ber the happiest Tve know for five years now and even th thar she i5 not hanny her in Califormsa She needs a chance and chosing what she wants will brang ber the harm n 44 she needs n this case she did not listen t m and will attend UC Berkley next fall Herkley is ail a verv Siid dolest miny neonle would die l 2 ES Copyright 2013 by Educational Testing Service ETS All rights reserved April 2013 ETS the ETS logo E RATER and CRITERION are registered trademarks of Educational Testing Service ETS 16 Criterion User Manual 4 Students may format the essay with bold text italics underlining bullets and numbering They may also use the Spell Check and Thesaurus features before submitting the essay if the instructor allowed these features for the assignment 5 Click lt Save gt to keep a draft of the essay The student will remain the same page to continue writing NOTE Timestamps of the last auto save of a response is viewable to students This feature was added so that students will know that their web connection is active If auto save does not refresh after five minutes students should copy and paste the essay into ano
38. have to spend thousands more doZars than if she went to Berkley Her parents told her that is fine with them but her guilty conscious is telling her that it is too much money since her parents wil now have to pay for three kids in college I told ber since her parents are fine with t then she should go to Cornell where it wil make her the happiest Tve know her for five years now and even though we are good friends it is very clear to me that she is not happy here in California She needs a change and choosing what she wants will bring her the get where she was was her dream to win the gold she wanted it The pressure was all on her was either go for what she wanted and win the gold or do what she should do and forget about it so she wouldn t ajure herseif further As we ad know she went for what she wanted and got it Not only was she and her teammates happy but so was all of the people living United States of America Everybody at some point im their Efe has been torn between what they want to do and what they feel they should do because of what others think or say The question is can we ever just do what we want to do regardless of what others around us say It s human that makes us want ungs and t s our comscsous that tell us what we want sa t always the nght thing or better for us and others around us In my opumon there defientely circumstances m which t ss better to forget what we should do and go ahead and do what we wan
39. he had worked all her Ef to get where she was It was her dream to win the gold she wanted it The pressure was all on her It was either go for what she wanted and win the gold or do what she should do and forget about it so she wouldn t iure herself further As we all know she went for what she wanted and got 2 Not only was she and her teammates happy but so was all of the people bving United States of America Everybody at some point in their Efe has been torn between what they want to do and what they foei they should do because of what others think or say The question is can we ever just do what we want to do regardless of what others around us say human navare that makes us want things and it is our conscious that tell us what we want isn t always the right thing or better for us and others around us In my opinion there are definitely circumstances in which it is better to forget what we should do and go ahead and do what we want to if we not there would be little to no happiness in our lives 7 The page refreshes to display the Dialogue window The dialogue can include discussion between the student owner of the essay other peers or the instructor Make your entry in the Dialogue window and then click the lt Send gt button mout Cent evr mtaoumces Anna Brown Student Son out AP English 2013 14 Class South School Dari South High School AP 201 6 Welcome co Engg 2013 14 Messe ema me your pasp
40. her that t s too much money smee her parents wil now have to pay for three lads m college I told ber smee her parents are fine woth t then she should go to Cornell where it will make her the happiest her for five years now and even though we are good friends it is very clear to me that she is not happy here in California She needs a change and choosing what she wants wil bring her the happiness she needs In this case she did not listen to me and will attend UC Berkley next fall Berkley is 558 a very good college many people would di to go there but she doesn t seem to be all that happy about her decision Another example Ken Strug at the Summer Ofvimpecs m Atlanta Even though later we found out she didn t have to do the vault she didn t know it at the She had already burt herself on the first vault and t would not be wise to vault agan but she had worked all ber Efe to get where she was was her dream to win the gold she wanted a The pressure was ai on her was esther go for what she wanted and win the goid or do what she should do and forget about so she wouldn t injure herself further As we ai know she went for what she wanted and got amp Not only was she and her teammates happy but so was all of the people living United States of America Everybody at some point m their Efe has been torn between what they want to do and what they feel they should do because of what others thank or sav The question 15 kan we ever j
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43. nge of language and syntax avaiable 12 you Uses grammar mechanics or sentence sivcture weh hardly any error Trait Levels Toe Level Hend beok Writing at the Proficient level costains simple wards used correctly with seme specc werd Writing at the Prohciest level contains seme errors but they do net generally prevent Writing at the Proficient level provides a clear sequence ol pieces ol information that are choices related te each other Sentences are pimpis but some sentence variety is demonstrated l The Criterion Score visible via the Score Analysis link see above reflects the overall quality of the writing compared to other essays written at the same grade level To learn more about the score read the description given and refer to your Writer s Handbook 2 The Trait Level score see above indicates if your writing skills are Developing Proficient or Advanced in regard to word choice conventions and organization development and style 3 Sample Essays and the Score Guide are available on the right side of the screen On the right side of yoru screen see above is the Writer s Sample and Score Guide Refer to the Writer s Sample to view an essay that is an example of good writing at your grade level Refer to the Score Guide to view the full scoring guide 4 Click on the Feedback Analysis link to view a graphic summary of error types and the number of errors for each type Click on each error type within the graph
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45. od schools UCLA offered ber a full ride to their school and it is also close to home but she d rather not go there UC Berkley and Cornell are what she wants to choose between It is obvious that she wants to go to Cornell but the problem is it is a very expensive school Berkley on the other hand is not as expensive but it is second on her list The problem all comes down to money She wants to go to Comal but that means her parents would have to spend thousands more dolars than if she went to Berkley Her parents told ber that is fine with them but ber guilty conscious is telling her that if is too much money since ber parents wil now have to pay for three kids im college I told ber since her parents are fine wath 3t then she should go to Cornell where t wil make her the happiest know her for five years now and even though we are good friends t is very clear to me that she s not happy bere m Cabforma She needs a change and choosmg what she wants wil bring her the happiness she needs In this case she did not listen to me and will attend UC Berkley next fall Berkley stil a very good college many people would die to go there but she doesn t seem to be all that happy about her decision Another example is Ken Strug at the Summer Otymp cs im Atlanta Even though later we found out she didn t have to do the vault she didn t know it at the time She had already burt herself on the first vault and it would not be wise to vault again but s
46. of Educational Testing Service ETS 24 Criterion User Manual mw Curent arwouects 1 m Anns Brown Son Out AP English 2013 14 South School District South High School AP Engish 201 5 Welcome co Enghsh 2023 14 Messe email me your acd question and an gwer once you heve sel registered ACTIVITY ASSIGNMENTS Make Commerzs Highlight a set of text withis the scremot Add Comment and the comment text Select a comment to edit or remove iz Save all commerces Peer Review Brian Harper 6 00000000000000000900000000000000000000000000606000000000000000000000000000900000000000000000000000000900000000090000009000000000000000000000000000009000000000000000000000000000000000000006000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000900 4 Student Leader Attempt 4 Response Student Leader Given me many different personales af high school and me varying interests of the many students what Kind of a student makes good leader What are me Quales ma help someone earn the respect of his her peers Wnte an essay in which you describe the Quatibes of good student leader to more than one college 15 racking their brains and deciding which college is the best Problems such as money proximity to home and the educational programs of the colleges arise For instance 1 have a freed who or UCLA which in my opinion are all extremely go
47. oney proxamity bo beme and the educabonal programs of the colleges arise For mstance have a fend who 18 deciding whether to po te Corks UCLA which in my open are all extremely pood schools UCLA offered her a full ride to their school and i also close to home but she d rather mot go there UC Berkley and Cornea are what she wants to choose between Tt is obvious thar sha problemn is i is a very expensive school Berkley on the other hand is not as expensive but it is second on her list The problem all comes down to money She wants to go Comel but that means her parents would have t spend thousands m r dolan told ber that is fine wih them but her guilty conscsvus is telling her that it is too amich money sinc her parents wel now have to pay for three kids in college T told her since her parents are fine with it then she should go to Cornell where t Pronoun Errore we her for five vears now and even though we are good friends it 1s very clear to me thal she ss not happy bere in Cahforma She needs a change and choosmm what she wants wil brmg her the happmess she needs In this case she did not listen to fal Berkiey stl a very good college many people would die go there but she doesn t seem te be all that happy about her decision Possesaive Lrrora Another example Keri Stag Marta Even Later we fund oat she didn t have do the vault shes didn t know it af the She had alrea
48. petition of w rd in your essay TIMED Essays If Your instruetar has chosen to have your essay timed a timer will appear You will have the time specified n The timer to plan and complete your essay Be sure and leave suficient time Tar writing the essay after you have finished planning it Timed essays do not aw ror ier revision B HB EE Spall Check Thesaurus Works Camions 1 The essay prompt is available at the top of the screen 2 Instructions for completing the essay are visible to the user 3 The Dialogue button will allow the Student to send a message to the Instructor A discussion box will appear displaying the conversation between the Student and Instructor Ho CLIENT EERVWCER EOF E HELF 5 Criterion fuma Brown Student Sige Gut AP English 2013 14 Clk South School Disticl South High School AP English 20 o Wadlrnama ha AP Fagin JEI 14 Pla mal mae peur pee aad manny QURE TALI ac see ann pe have mel repintar ACTVITY ASSIGNMENTS Blanc Talact pisa tre to gat Rava gs luda tea and imatrurtisng Revie andditiacal material i available Dialngus for each agzignemanst inzludas instnarinrz and pears for Enter rezponnza taut in tha editer belpa Save dira bn wari nm Later Submit acd view ethernet Student Leader Attempt 8 1 nu ewe leader Given the many diferent pe
49. rsonales af a high schoo and Ihe varying interests of the many students wal kind of a srudent makes a good leader What are the qualities tat help someone eam the respect of his or her peers Wine an essay in which you describe me qualities af a good student leader DS Tec Os ENTERING YOUR ESSAY When you ar ready 10 wie your essay you can type it directry into the Essay Entry Screen or you can ihe essay in a word processing application and and paste it into the Essay Entry Screen Paragraphing is essential Paragraph breaks are indicated by using the ENTER key to create doubie sparcing Using the Tab key io indent will not work since it has been deactivated if you are copying and pasting from an outside document make sure you have no lost the paragraph breaks of the original Do not put anything inte the Essay Entry Screen except the text of the essay Do not add your name date section subject course name or number or any other information that is not a part of your essa El information as sentence fragments which will negatively impact the final score YOu can save your essay and complete it later if you not finshed writing during writing session When you ane completety finished click Submit to hav your essay evaluated and retained in your porticao If your instruetor has made tne Spell Checker available please click the Checker button to check your speling before submitting your essay your instructor h
50. s either go for what she wanted and win the gold or do what she should do and forget about it so che wouldn t injure herself farther As we all know she went for what she wanted and got it Not only was che and her teazrimares happy 50 was of the people Eveng United States of America Evervbody at some point in their Bfe has been tom what they want t do and what they feel they should do because of what ethers think or The question n we ever ust do whar we want t do regandless of hal others around us sav himan nature that makes us want thengs and i amp eur conscusas thal tell us whai we want mn al yays the righi thing or better for os amd others around ws my opimion there are definitele crcumstances m which ots better to forget what we shoud da an gn ahead amd do what we want b H we do niet there world be Bite in no hippier m our Ives 11 Criterion will split the screen so that you can move between the previous version and the new text box Click Submit when you are ready to have Criterion evaluate your revised essay Copyright 2013 by Educational Testing Service ETS All rights reserved April 2013 ETS the ETS logo E RATER and CRITERION are registered trademarks of Educational Testing Service ETS 22 Criterion User Manual nomm MANET 1 Criterion Anna Brown Son Qul AP English 2013 14 Clie Soul Seha Diiic South High School Engi
51. sary UC Berkey ec UCLA which in my are all extremely good schools UCLA is or conscious that tell us Offered her 3 full ride to ther school and it ic alo close to home but she d rather not go there UC Berkley and Cornell are what che wants to Choose berween TI r obras that she wants to go l Cornell bus the problem zs g a very expensive school Berkley on the othe hand oot expezscve but l 19 second on her bet The problem all comes down b money She wants to go to Cornell but that means her parents would have po spend thousands more dears Gian if aie went to Berkley Her parents teki ber that is fine wih them bus ber conscious is telieg ber that it is 00 moch money since her parents will now have to pav for three kids in college 1 told her since ber parents are fie with then she shold go to Cornell here qt will make her the hapgnest I ve know her for five years now and even though we good fends l very clea to me that she b mot happy here m Cakforma She needs change and choosmyg what she 7 wants wil bring her the bapgpuness she needs n this case she dixi mot esten to me and wil attemd UC Berkey next faz Berkley is still a very good college may people would die to go there bus she doesn t seem to be that happy about her decision i Another example Sirag at tbe Suremer m Alania Even though liter we found cut she didn t hace to do the vaut she X
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53. t to 1f we do not there would be little to no happiness in our lives 3 The page refreshes the Manage Comments text field displays to the right of the essay Type your comments and click lt Enter gt m Criterion wowt Cumwranacta nn Anna rown Student Sion Out AP English 2013 14 CMe South School District South High School AP English 201 Ge Welcome co AP Engish 2023 14 Messe ema me your password and secunty question and answer once you have srerec ACTIVITY ASSIGNMENTS Make Commerzs Highlight a set of cext withis the scremot below Add Comment and ester the comment text Select comment to edit or remove it Save all comments Peer Review Brian Harper Student Leader Attempt 4 Response Student Leader Given me many different personales at high amp choo and me varying interests of the many students what Kind of a student makes good leader What are me qualities Mat help someone ear me reapect of his or her peers Write an essay in which you descnbe me qualities of good student leader Comments Ei Everybody at some point in their Efe has been torn between what they want to do and what they feel they should do because of what others think or say The question is can we ever just do what we want to do regardiess of what others around us say human nature that makes us want things and it is our conscious that tell us At this time of the year every senior who has been accepted
54. tant chagnostc feedback and a Cr anon score Learn more System Requirements PDF Sludents Have more opportunities to pracbca writing at herr gel mmedale feedback and revise essays based on the feedback Teachers Can decrease their workload and free up ime to concentrate on the content of students work and teach hegher level wribng Admurestrators Can make data diven decisions and easy monitor wribng performance across and classroom wnibng perlormance Returning User New User User You will need an access code from your Administrator or create an account H you used Cnienon with previous institution or class please sign im with thal user mame and password There is no need to create a new Password Create Account 2 In the appropriate fields enter the User Name and the Password you created 3 Click on the Sign In button 4 Your Criterion Home page will appear Copyright 2013 by Educational Testing Service ETS All rights reserved April 2013 ETS the ETS logo E RATER and CRITERION are registered trademarks of Educational Testing Service ETS 5 Criterion User Manual 2 2 1 Forgot User Name 1 In the Criterion Log in page go to the Returning User section and click on the Forgot User Name link see below ETS HOME CRITERION HOME 5 Criterion E Sign In to Your Criterion amp Account HELF CLIEMT SERVICE 5 The Criterion O
55. ther source as a precaution If the web connection has been lost the student will not be able to submit the essay In the event that the web connection is lost Criterion System Requirements available on the Criterion log in page should be verified Everybody at some point m them has been torn between what they want to do and what they feel they should that makes us want things and it is our conscious that tell us At this of the year every senior who has been lucational programs of the colleges arise For instance I have a friend who ts deciding whether to go to Cornell home but she d rather not go there UC Berkley and Cornell are what she wants to choose between It is obviou Ihe problem all comes down to money She wants to go to Cornell but that means her parents would have to sp money since her parents will now have to pay for three kids in college I told her since her parents are fine with it that she 15 not happy here in California She needs a hangs and choosing what she wants will bring her the happt there but she doesn t seem to be all that happy about her decision Another example is Keri Strug at the Summet vault and it would not be wise to vault again but she had worked all her life to get where she was It was her dre about it so she injure herself further As we all know she went for what she wanted and got it Not only what they want to do and what they feel they should do because of what others think or s
56. ualities that help someone eam the respect of his her peers Write an essay in which you descrine ihe qualities of a good student ieade d 5 ores ENTERING TOUR ESSAY Wen you ar ready 10 wie your essay vou type directhy ind Essay Entry Screen f you can wribe The essay in wond processing application and and paste int tne Essay Entry Screen Paragraphing is essential Paragraph breaks ane indicated by using the ENTER key to create doubie spacing Using tne Tab key To indent will nat work since it has been deactivated If you ane copying amd pastimg from an outside document make sure you nave ned lost the paragraph breaks of the original Do not put anything inte the Essay Entry Screen except the text of the essay Do not add your name date section subject course name or number or any offer infonmabon that is mof part of your essay The sconng engine will interpret this Information as sentence fragments which will negatively impact the final score YOU your essay and complete it later if y u ar finished writing during wriinig Session When you completery finished click Submit t hav your essay evaluated and retained in your portio If yaur instruetar has made the Spell Checker available please click the Spell Checker button to check your speling before submitting your essay your instructor has made the Thesaurus available you may use mis option to help you avad re
57. ust do what we want to do regardiess of what others around us say It s human nature that makes us want things and t s our conscious that tel us what we want isn t always the mght timg or better for us and others around us In my opanon there are defimiely crcumstances m which t s better to forget what we should do and go ahead and do what we want to we do not there would be ittie to no happiness in our Eves NOTE Refer to the Writer s Handbook if you wish to view additional information on the errors that have been identified in your essay 10 To correct and improve the essay click the lt Revise gt button at the bottom of the screen A screen asking you to confirm that you would like to continue will appear Click Ok NOTE The lt Revise gt button will only be available to you if your instructor has allowed multiple attempts for the assignment If youa re completing a timed assignment you will not be able to revise your essay nomm MET 1 E Criterion Anna Broyan jiga Gat AP English 2013 14 South Sehsol South High School Engish 2017 b AP Dal 202 Paai enl m poor Greed B Suey Gua and iier dace pou Fro dal OD ACTIVITY ASSIGHMEHT 5 Fevers dined Bland adit cs dave a firm plan Pd r n Aerien rail bightights te vien Writer a iuggtiti nd F rvin asd edit Wii il eere der ait
58. vise their essays guided by instant ckagnostc feedback and a Cnienon score Learn more System Requirements PDF Students Have more opportunibes lo praci e wrrbng at ther gan pace gel mmediale feedback and revise essays based on fhe T aj Teachers Can decrease their workload and free up ime to concentrate on the content of students work and teach hegher level ring skils Adimnetratons Can make data diven decisions and easdy monio wring performance across and classroom ning perlormance Returning User New User User name You wil need an access code from your Administrator or Insirucior io create an account H you used Criterion with previous institution class please sign with thal user mame and password There is no need to create 3 new User Name E Copyright 2013 by Educational Testing Service ETS rights reserved April 2013 ETS the ETS logo E RATER and CRITERION are registered trademarks of Educational Testing Service ETS 3 Criterion User Manual 2 In the Criterion Create User Account screen enter the information in the fields provided Create User Account LE Access Code First Hama Middle initial Lait Mam Email Address optional for students Confirm Email Additis User Nam Fatxword Security Geevtion Make a selection Cresbe Custom Question LI 4 a I r Security
59. word and secunty Question and answer once you have se ceo srerec ACTIVITY ASSIGNMENTS Make Commerzs Highlight a set of cext within the attempt below Add Comment and exter the comment text Select comment to edit or remove it Save all comments Peer Review Brian Harper 200006006606 006006666066 6 66 4 Student Leader Attempt 4 Response Student Leader Given me many different personales at high schoo and me varying interests of the Many students what Kind of student makes good leader What he qualities mat help so meone eam me rapatt of his or her peers Write an essay in which you describe the qualties of good student Comments updated successfally Everybody at some point in their Efe has been tom between what they want to do and what they feel they should do because of what others think or say The question is can we ever jast do what we want to do regardless of what others around us say It s human nature that makes us want things and t s our conscious that tell us to more than one college is racking their brans and decstemg which college is the best Problems such as money proximity to home and the educational programs of the ar or UCLA which in my opinion are all extremely good schools UCLA offered her a full ride to their school and amp is also close to home but she d rather not go there UC Berkley and woth st then she should go to Cornell where it wil m

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